Question:
can you plz revise this short paragraph plz thank you?
2007-11-21 19:35:22 UTC
The exit examination prepares students for other exams. It is good practice for students who will take more important exams such as LPI, TOEFL, or SAT. Also, if students get used to exams, they will not be anxious about exams. On the other hand, students who have not taken exams yet have no idea to study Moreover, students will discover which career they can look forward to as they study for the exam. For example, my Physics teacher found Physics interesting as he prepared for the final exam. Before the exam, he didn’t know any mathematical formulae and vocabulary to help solve word problems. When students prepare for the exit exam, they are also sharpening their general test taking skills as well as strengthening their knowledge base.
ther eare many grammatical errors in this paragraph. plz fix them for me plz itas urgent
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2007-11-21 20:33:20 UTC
The exit examination prepares students for other exams. It is good practice for students who will take more important tests such as LPI, TOEFL, or SAT. Also, if students get used to sitting exams, they will not be so anxious about taking them in the future. On the other hand, students who have not taken exams yet, have little or no idea how to study for them. Moreover, students may well discover which career interests them as they study for the exam. For example, my Physics teacher found Physics interesting as he prepared for his final test. Before the exam, he didn’t know any mathematical formulae or vocabulary to help solve word problems. When students prepare for the exit exam, they are also sharpening their general test taking skills as well as improving their general knowledge.



I've changed things around a little - not many grammatical errors! I just thought the word "exam" got a bit repetitive. Anyway, hope this helps in some way. Good luck.
kate
2007-11-22 03:47:59 UTC
Exit examinations prepare students for other exams. It is good practice for students who will take more important exams such as LPI, TOEFL, or SAT. This is because if students get used to exams, they will not be anxious when they take other exams. This also give students ideas on how to study for exams.



Also, as students study for their exams, they discover what they are looking for in a career. I have this Physics teacher who became so because he found Physics interesting as he was preparing for his final exam.



Preparing for the exit exams sharpens the test-taking skills of students and it increases their knowledge.
2007-11-22 03:39:50 UTC
you you missed a period "study Moreover" should be "study. Moreover" Physics should not be capitilized. formulae should be formulas. he didn't know any mathematical formulas or vocabulary...



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