How is my intro -- really short plzz read?

Question

In many different works of literature, characters often change for the better or worse. The circumstances and the society act as catalysts by allowing the character to grow and develop. Characters usually change because of specific events that take place in their life allowing them to understand who they really are. In the Death of the Salesman by Arthur Miller, the protagonist Biff Loman progresses by learning to accept reality and come to realization that he is just a "dime a dozen."

Please rate it out of A-F

and plzz feel free to give suggestions =)

Answer 1

B...really good read but it should b longer and dont 4get ur TAB

Answer 2

Characters usually change because of specific events that take place in their life (lives?)



is just a "dime a dozen." (period should be after ".)

a "dime a dozen".



B+

Answer 3

probable besides the fact that it seems such as you're rubbing it of their faces somewhat too. Dial it down a notch. that is large which you're satisfied yet remember your buddies are important and that they are those which would be there for you once you fairly need them. don't be the nasty aggressive woman different women like to hate.

Answer 4

i think it's googd and no changes i would give a A.