Can you do a grammar check, please! quickest answer gets 10 points!?

Question

fix anything you think may need a change.

MAKE-UP BY IMAN

Iman is an ex fashion model and an African/American beauty who founded the Iman Cosmetics company in 1994 Her make-up is mostly dramatic. In the first picture, the model is wearing very colourful make-up. Colourful makeup like this can be worn in warm weather. Also, eye shadow near the tear duct of the eye will make eyes look brighter as shown by the model in the first picture. The second picture is a perfect example of the modernized 1920’s look. In the third picture, the peachy eyes and lips gives it a soft and minimal look.




MAKE-UP BY NAVEEDA

Naveeda is a highly accomplished Asian bridal make-up artist. She is also one of the first make-up artists listed in every Asian magazine editors contact book. Naveeda’s make-up is very sexy, edgy and high fashioned. She’s a very creative make-up artist with a passion for perfection. Her make-up ranges from being very high fashioned to very classy and glamorous. As you can see, the first side is filled with dramatic and daring makeup while the other side is shows a model with classy smoky eyes.


MAKE-UP BY JAWAAD

Jawaad is a professional high fashion make-up artist. The picture on the second page shows fresh and colourful make-up. The model on the second page is wearing pink, violet and orange eye shadows. The Spring make-up mostly features on eyes. You can wear lovely shadows, from peach to violet and blue to soft green and look chic. The smoky eyes on the fourth page are a dramatic and elegant finish to the gorgeous formal dress. The peacock look on the last page suggests that Jawaad is a very creative make-up artist who produces beautiful works of art.

Answer 1

You mean quickest correct answer, I hope. :P Please take note of my comments in parentheses; you may want to make your own edits.

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MAKE-UP BY IMAN



Iman is an ex-fashion model and an African/American beauty who founded the Iman Cosmetics company in 1994. Her make-up is mostly dramatic. In the first picture, the model is wearing very colourful make-up. Colourful makeup like this can be worn in warm weather. Also, eye shadow near the tear duct of the eye will make eyes look brighter, as shown by the model in the first picture. The second picture is a perfect example of the modernized 1920’s look. In the third picture, the peachy eyes and lips give it a soft and minimal look.



(((((Added dash between ex-fashion, period after 1994, more commas, changed "gives" to "give" in last sentence. Maybe change the word "look" to "appearance" in the last sentence to avoid repetition??)))))





MAKE-UP BY NAVEEDA



Naveeda is a highly accomplished Asian bridal make-up artist. She is also one of the first make-up artists listed in every Asian magazine editors' contact book. Naveeda’s make-up is very sexy, edgy and high fashioned. She’s a very creative make-up artist with a passion for perfection. Her make-up ranges from being very high fashioned to very classy and glamorous. As you can see, the first side is filled with dramatic and daring makeup while the other side shows a model with classy smoky eyes.



(((((Added apostrophe after editors', removed the word "is" in the last sentence.)))))





MAKE-UP BY JAWAAD



Jawaad is a professional high fashion make-up artist. The picture on the second page shows fresh and colourful make-up. The model on the second page is wearing pink, violet and orange eye shadows. The Spring make-up mostly features on eyes. You can wear lovely shadows, from peach to violet and blue to soft green, and look chic. The smoky eyes on the fourth page are a dramatic and elegant finish to the gorgeous formal dress. The peacock look on the last page suggests that Jawaad is a very creative make-up artist who produces beautiful works of art.



(((((Added comma after "soft green". You may want to consider changing the sentence "The Spring make-up mostly features on eyes." to make it more clear. Maybe something like "spring make-up mainly emphasizes the eyes.")))))

Answer 2

MAKE-UP BY IMAN



Imam is an ex fashion model and an African/American beauty who founded the Imam Cosmetics company in 1994 her make-up is mostly dramatic. In the first picture, the model is wearing very colorful make-up. Colorful makeup like this can be worn in warm weather. Also, eye shadow near the tear duct of the eye will make eyes look brighter as shown by the model in the first picture. The second picture is a perfect example of the modernized 1920’s look. In the third picture, the peachy eyes and lips gives it a soft and minimal look.









MAKE-UP BY NAVEEDA



Nevada is a highly accomplished Asian bridal make-up artist. She is also one of the first make-up artists listed in every Asian magazine editors contact book. Nevada’s make-up is very sexy, edgy and high fashioned. She’s a very creative make-up artist with a passion for perfection. Her make-up ranges from being very high fashioned to very classy and glamorous. As you can see, the first side is filled with dramatic and daring makeup while the other side is shows a model with classy smoky eyes.





MAKE-UP BY JAWAAD



Jawed is a professional high fashion make-up artist. The picture on the second page shows fresh and colorful make-up. The model on the second page is wearing pink, violet and orange eye shadows. The spring make-up mostly features on eyes. You can wear lovely shadows, from peach to violet and blue to soft green and look chic. The smoky eyes on the fourth page are a dramatic and elegant finish to the gorgeous formal dress. The peacock look on the last page suggests that Jawed is a very creative make-up artist who produces beautiful works of art

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Just a missing full stop after 1994.