Ancient Greece?

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Ancient Greece

Ancient Greece can be found at Europe. Greece’s neighbors are Rome, Egypt and Turkey. Most of the Greece are mountain and hills. Greek fancy sports also they started the Olympics. Greece has a lot of God and Goddesses, like Zeus, Poseidon, Gaea, and Uranus.
Greece is the most mountainous country in Europe. The mainland of ancient Greece is Peloponnesus peninsula. 80% of Greece has mountains or hills. The climate in Greece was hot and dry and it rain limited. That’s why it makes ancient Greece bad for agriculture. But on the west of Greece has lakes and wetlands. Greece has one of the largest canyon in the world, Meteora and Vikos Canyon.
Greek adores sports. They also start the Olympic. The games began with a sacrifice to the god Zeus. Every four years the Olympic games was held in the stadium at Olympia. Only men can compete on this game. They play the games as part of a religious life. Since the game is a religious, if someone cheated they cant play anymore, because cheating is consider for disrespecting Gods. The three games they play at Olympics are Boxing, weightlifting, and the pentathlon. The winners received a wreath of olive leaves to wear on their heads.
Ancient Greece believed at God and Goddesses. Zeus, Poseidon and Uranus are some of the Gods and Gaea is one of the Goddesses. Zeus is the God of the thunder. His father was Cronus. His brothers were Poseidon and Hades. His spouse is Hera. Zeus weapon is thunderbolt, which he hurls at those who displease him. He also punish those who lies. Poseidon is Zeus’s brother. He is the God of the Sea. He married Amphitrite. His weapon is a trident, which she ca n shake the Earth. He’s also greedy. Gaea is the Goddesses of Earth. Her son is Uranus. The other God was Uranus. He is the God of the Sky. He is the son and husband of Gaea. He died because of the wounds or he withdrew to Earth.
Overall, Greece is a hot and dry country. That makes Greece a bad for agriculture. Also most of Greece are mountains and hills. Olympics was considered as part of a religious life. Only men can play at the Olympics. Greek believed at the God and Goddesses. Zeus is the God of the Thunder, Poseidon is the God of the Sea, Gaea is the God of the Earth and Uranus is the God of the Sky.

Answer 1

I'm assuming here that English is not your first language! The biggest problems I found were entirely too many repetitions AND bad tenses. If this needs to be a certain number of words, you need to find more information, not keep repeating the same information (you repeated the same set of facts three times!).

Hope this helps you out!



Ancient Greece



Ancient Greece can be found in Europe.

Greece's neighbors are Italy, Egypt and Turkey (note: those are the current neighbors. Only Egypt was around with ancient Greece. Italy and Turkey are somewhat modern countries).

Greece is the most mountainous country in Europe. The mainland of ancient Greece is Peloponnese peninsula. Eighty percent of Greece has mountains or hills. The climate in Greece was hot and dry and with limited rain. That's why it made ancient Greece bad for agriculture. But in the western part of Greece there are lakes and wetlands. Greece also has one of the largest canyons in the world, Meteora and Vikos Canyon.

The Greeks adore sports; they even started the Olympics. The games began with a sacrifice to the god Zeus. Every four years the Olympic games were held in the stadium at Olympia. Only men could compete. They played the games as part of a religious life. Since the game is religious, if someone cheated they could not participate any more, because cheating was considered disrespecting the gods.

The three games they played at the Olympics were boxing, weightlifting, and the pentathlon. The winners received a wreath of olive leaves to wear on their heads.

The ancient Greeks believed in many gods and goddesses. Zeus, Poseidon and Uranus are some of the gods and Gaea is one of the goddesses. Zeus is the god of the thunder. His father was Cronus. His brothers were Poseidon and Hades. His spouse was Hera. Zeus' weapon was thunderbolt, which he hurled at those who displeased him. He also punished those who lied. Poseidon was Zeus's brother. He was the god of the Sea. He married Amphitrite. His weapon was a trident, which with he could shake the Earth. He was also greedy.

Gaea was the goddesses of Earth. Her son was Uranus. He was the god of the sky. He was the son and husband of Gaea. He died because of the wounds and he withdrew to Earth.

Overall, Greece is a hot and dry country. That makes Greece a bad for agriculture. Also most of Greece are mountains and hills. The Olympics were considered as part of a religious life. Only men could. The Greek believed in many gods and goddesses.

Answer 2

Ancient Greece can be found in Europe. Greece’s neighbors are Rome, Egypt and Turkey. Most of Greece is mountains and hills. Greece has a lot of gods and goddesses, like Zeus, Poseidon, Gaea, and Uranus.

Greece is the most mountainous country in Europe. The mainland of ancient Greece is Peloponnesus peninsula. 80% of Greece has mountains or hills. The climate in Greece was hot and dry and it rain very little. That’s why ancient Greece was bad for agriculture. But on the west part of Greece, there are lakes and wetlands. Greece has one of the largest canyons in the world, Meteora and Vikos Canyon.

Greeks adore sports. They also started the Olympics. The games began with a sacrifice to the god Zeus. Every four years the Olympic games were held in the stadium at Olympia. Only men could compete in this game. They played the games as part of their religious life. Since the game was religious, if someone cheated they couldn't play anymore, because cheating is considered as disrespecting Gods. The three games they played at the Olympics were Boxing, weightlifting, and the pentathlon. The winners received a wreath of olive leaves to wear on their heads.

Ancient Greece believed in God and Goddesses. Zeus, Poseidon and Uranus are some of the Gods and Gaea is one of the Goddesses. Zeus is the God of the thunder. His father was Cronus. His brothers were Poseidon and Hades. His spouse is Hera. Zeus' weapon was the thunderbolt, which he hurled at those who displeased him. He also punished those who lied. Poseidon was Zeus’s brother. He was the God of the Sea. He married Amphitrite. His weapon was a trident, which could shake the Earth. He’s also greedy. Gaea is the Goddesses of Earth. Her son was Uranus. The other God was Uranus. He was the God of the Sky. He was the son and husband of Gaea. He died because of the wounds he withdrew to Earth.

Overall, Greece is a hot and dry country. That makes Greece bad for agriculture. Also most of Greece are mountains and hills. Olympics were considered as part of a religious life. Only men could play at the Olympics. Greeks believed in the God and Goddesses. Zeus is the God of the Thunder, Poseidon is the God of the Sea, Gaea is the God of the Earth and Uranus is the God of the Sky

Answer 3

Ancient Greece

Answer 4

You have gotten a lot of factual information in this essay and there are just a few gramatical errors. Is this for history class or English? The requirements are different depending on the class and on your age.