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Question

The city of Rutuli was closed down for the next eleven days, because of the
Death of Turnus, the King. In the first nine days of mourning the men of
Of Rutuli gathered timber. On the tenth day they used the timbre they had
Gathered and made a fire, brought out the body of Turnus, and threw it in the
Fire. After all the people gathered around the pyre, the flames of the fire were
Extinguished with wine, as was the custom. Then his friends and family collected
What was left of him, his bones. They wrapped him in white robes and gently
Laid him into a golden casket, and laid the casket in the hollow of the ground
That was to be his grave. Slowly they build a tomb around the casket, and
Walked away form his tomb crying. They went back to the city to feast in the
House that had once belonged to their great King.

Answer 1

The city of Rutuli was closed down for the next eleven days, because of the death of Turnus, the king. In the first nine days of mourning the men of Rutuli gathered timber. On the tenth day, they used the timber they had gathered and made a fire, brought out the body of Turnus, then threw it in the fire. After all the people had gathered around the pyre, the flames of the fire were extinguished with wine, as was the custom. Then his friends and family collected what was left of him, his bones. They wrapped him in white robes and gently laid him into a golden casket, and laid the casket in the hollow of the ground that was to be his grave. Slowly they built a tomb around the casket, and

walked away form his tomb, crying. They went back to the city to feast in the house that had once belonged to their great king.

Answer 2

The city of Rutuli was closed down for the next eleven days because of the death of King Turnus. In the first nine days of mourning the men of Rutuli gathered timber. On the tenth day they used the timbre they had gathered, made a fire, brought out the body of Turnus, and threw it in the fire. After all the people gathered around the pyre, the flames of the fire were extinguished with wine, as was the custom. Then, his friends and family collected what was left of his bones. They wrapped him in white robes and gently laid him into a golden casket, and laid the casket in the ground which was his grave. Slowly they built a tomb around the casket, and walked away form his tomb, crying. They went back to the city for a feast in the house that had once belonged to their great King.

Answer 3

The city of Rutuli was closed down for the next eleven days because of the death of King Turnus. In the first nine days of morning the men of Rutuli gathered timber. On the tenth day they used the gathered timber to make a fire and burned the body of King Turnus. After all of the people gathered around the pyre the flames were extinguished with wine. King Turnus' friends and family collected his remains and wrapped him in white robes. They then gently placed his body in a golden casket into his grave. While crying, the people slowly built a tomb around his grave. They then went back tot he city to feast in the house which once belonged to their great King.

Answer 4

The city of Rutuli was closed down for the next eleven days because of the death of Turnus, the King. In the first nine days of mourning, the men of Rutuli gathered timber and on the tenth day they built a fire and threw the body of Turnus into the flames. After all the people gathered around the pyre, the fire was extinguished with wine, as was the custom. Then his friends and family collected his bones, his only remains. They wrapped him in white robes and gently

laid him into a golden casket in the hollow ground.

That was to be his grave. Slowly they built a tomb around the casket and left in tears. They went back to the city to feast in the

house that had once belonged to their great King.