Question:
Ideas for a short story the beginning: 'I couldn't believe my eyes.'?
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2009-08-03 00:11:44 UTC
I am writing a short story for school, and the beginning of the story must start with 'I couldn't believe my eyes.' I cannot come up with anything! So... Please help!
Thanks. :)
Four answers:
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2009-08-03 01:20:07 UTC
i couldnt believe my eyes. the blood on my hands almost had a pulse of its own. i stand over a girls body, i dont know who's the blood is becasue both our clothes are covered.
heiNey
2009-08-03 00:22:10 UTC
I couldn't believe my eyes, my best friend was kissing my boyfriend/girlfriend.



I couldn't believe my eyes, everything I worked for went up in smoke.



I couldn't believe my eyes, my beloved [insert pet here] was hit by a car.



I couldn't believe my eyes, the most beautiful girl I had ever seen just smiled and waved at me.
artemis
2009-08-03 00:24:03 UTC
i couldnt believe my eyes my dog had just fallen into my drawing , i could see him running around in the picture. I thought to myself i wonder if i can go in the picture to, i pointed my finger at the paper and attempted to put my finger in
jessie-lee
2009-08-03 00:20:07 UTC
maybe someone famous is standing in the characters bedroom :p then they woke up and it was just a dream lol


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